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Bittersweet humanity,
Tear me down again,
Brick by brick I'll fall,
Bare me with your cutting words,
Rendering my soul immobile,
Leer at my brokenness,
Leave me to my fate,
Fear now controls my mind,
And it begins with the rising sun.
Words can make you feel hopeless,useless, and completely alone. Words can make you powerful. Words can destroy you.
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:iconlonelynightrain:
lonelynightrain Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer

Beautiful and well written poetry.


Wonderful job.

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:iconlove-the-peace:
Love-the-peace Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much!! :3
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:iconlonelynightrain:
lonelynightrain Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome, Love. :)
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:iconmichel-le-fou:
Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013  Professional Writer
Cant determine the meter.
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:iconlove-the-peace:
Love-the-peace Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Student Writer
I was just going with a traditional a,b,c,b ect. pattern
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:iconmichel-le-fou:
Michel-le-fou Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Professional Writer
I will recheck that, but anyway I don't reject it. Submit to Poetry.
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